I sit alone feeling so empty and lonely,
i think of you often,
every minute of the day
wondering how you are
what your doing
wishing i could hold you in ma arms
and make everything b OK
I sit remembering all the times we’ve shared
the late nite talks that we use 2 have
wishing that it could be the way it use 2
i wish i could turn back time to the first time you told me you loved me,
the feeling that i had is indescribable
u mean so much 2 me that it hurts,
i dream of all that will be,
and crying a tear for every minute
we are apart
At times i tell myself i am strong
and the times that im not with you
will go by and it will be the way it use 2
yet at others i sit and cry and wonder
why love has 2 hurt so much
Through somewhere
in the loneliness
somewhere in the emptiness,
i find ma self feeling very loved
and i realize it not the loving that hurts so much
its being without you
12 responses to “Lonely without you”
gulzar. malik
December 3rd, 2009 at 12:42
hai, Amit
you r a very good writer your’s feeling touches the heart keep on writing………
rydermiles
December 3rd, 2009 at 12:57
thanks a lot gul π
shawnamsmith
December 3rd, 2009 at 13:11
i definitely can relate to this… I am going through a very tough breakup and am lonely and miss him.
rydermiles
December 3rd, 2009 at 13:16
may god bless you with all strength to handle this situation
and may he come back to you and fill your life with happiness
shawnamsmith
December 3rd, 2009 at 13:38
Thank you for the kind words…. I am trying on focusing on finding happiness within myself… He is no longer an option. Being heartbroken is the worst.
rydermiles
December 3rd, 2009 at 16:48
@shawnamsmith: whatever path you chose be firm to it, keeping in mind the obstacles you have to walk through to stick to the path
cherrykitten
December 3rd, 2009 at 14:41
love hurts so much because those who are trusted and loved more than anybody else can as well hurt you more.
You are very impressive and touching in your article, congratulations! =)
rydermiles
December 3rd, 2009 at 14:51
thanks a lot π
agree to what you said…..
J@GS
December 8th, 2009 at 18:28
very nice %^*&(#……….i knw u r nice shayer….this is good one
rydermiles
December 9th, 2009 at 15:09
Thanks a lot dear π
cyanideprincess
April 8th, 2011 at 13:31
Lovely poem
I posted the top picture on my site, linked it back to this page. Just wanted to let you know, although I don't know where you got it from, I credited you π
seham
November 11th, 2011 at 19:50
nice