The moment i saw you cry
My world came crashing down
To see those tears fall from your eyes
Turned my smile into a frown
I wanted to hold you
Make everything alright
But there was nothing i could do
To stop you from crying tonight
I felt like a failure
To myself and to you
But you said that was nothing
That i could do
I held you close
And made your pain my own
I tried to make it feel
Like you were home
You kissed me softly
Said you would be alright
But there was something in your eyes
That had me worried that night
And to this day i promise
Not to let you cry alone
And to take the pain you feel
And make it my own
14 responses to “Wont let you cry…”
dipika
December 8th, 2009 at 10:39
Very excellent simply superb
m falling in love wit you
rydermiles
December 8th, 2009 at 10:41
thanks for appreciating,
BUT statutory warning warning
don’t u even think to fall in love with me,
falling in love wit me would be like banging your head against the wall,
m not a good lover, but i can be a good friend
Tejal
December 8th, 2009 at 11:53
its very good, i liked it a lot.
supriya
December 8th, 2009 at 16:05
hii Amit….
Are wah Bohot hi badiya hai….superb..
jatinder
December 9th, 2009 at 11:07
la jawab bhaiya………….kya likh te oh simply superb…
rydermiles
December 9th, 2009 at 15:18
thank you paaji š
supriya
December 9th, 2009 at 14:36
i have no word to say how good u r Amit,
i would like to say few lines
If i were a tear in ur’s eyes
i would roll down onto ur lips
But if u, were a tear in my eyes,
I would never cry…
As i would be afraid to LOSE YOU..
rydermiles
December 9th, 2009 at 15:17
Thanks a lot š
don you worry none of my friends can lose me or forget me
cos m like a fewi stick clue once attached only death separate me
LOL…. š
Gulzar
December 9th, 2009 at 14:39
Hai Amit,
Its very NICE
rydermiles
December 9th, 2009 at 15:11
thanks š
Kamlesh
December 9th, 2009 at 16:26
Nice man…. superb attempt.
rydermiles
December 9th, 2009 at 16:28
thanks a lot DOST!!
J B Jux
December 30th, 2009 at 21:54
Pretty good Amit. I hope you find the princess of your life!
Cheers,
J B Jux.
vbrekkidd80
January 14th, 2010 at 11:05
Very nice poetry good stuff